tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-724514912490807643.post8207014806764615023..comments2023-10-10T21:17:04.192+05:30Comments on Venomous nectar: The Path I FearPhantomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09644450212871060830noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-724514912490807643.post-33964758124164321082010-03-19T13:37:03.894+05:302010-03-19T13:37:03.894+05:30@abhishek hey thanks.. i know i know i keep remind...@abhishek hey thanks.. i know i know i keep reminding myself not all poems need to rhyme but i just write with a flow.... really appreciate the constructive criticism :)Phantomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09644450212871060830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-724514912490807643.post-46267820580461166392010-03-18T20:02:39.471+05:302010-03-18T20:02:39.471+05:30Well written, esp the last para.
As a general thin...Well written, esp the last para.<br />As a general thing - I think you'd write better if you would stop really trying to rhyme.<br />:)<br />@abhishekaggy / <br />AbhishekAbhishek Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15054225837749109753noreply@blogger.com